Toilet Seat Cute
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Do u like my poem??? 10 points to the best critic!?
I need to write a poem for my my English class, and this is hat I've come so far. idk, just "came" to me lol. So, I wrote up and I think it is … cute. What do you think? also-and rhyme enoguh sense or not? only that the general opinion, good and evil thanks youuuu! All things bright and new Imagine a world where everything is new, never pre-owned, is there only for you. a new door knob, toilet seats clean like never before used beverage machines "There's nothing dirty or that is what seems to have never been touched that shines and shines and everything is working perfectly in sync never need to repair a perfect mechanism to scream No one to break your machine in this perfect world where everything is virgin
Or thats how it looks "seems to cast doubt in his mind that all things are not like your poem suggests. Just a little annoying but that crossed my mind. Maybe Once nothing is dirty, everything so pristine. Because it has never been touched, all things that sparkle and shine. It's just an idea for a very good poem. Congratulations poet. Robert
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